Zincian Legend: Overview of the World

Story Behind the Story

The Chosen was based off a set of dreams I had one night way back in my freshman year of highschool (October 2003 to be exact). I had doodled a random girl that had blue hair (the color of the ink) and a red mark on her forehead before heading to bed. Little did I know that that doodle would follow me later.

She appeared to be in a village. It was a simplistic village with simplistic values surrounded by forest. I woke up the next morning after she had gone back to her village to find it in flames. I was quite intrigued by the dream and wanted to know what in the world was going to happen next. During class, I constantly had the dream in the back of my mind, and later that night when I went to bed, I found out what happened next. By some sort of sheer luck, my dream picked right back up where it started from and continued on. I traveled with her companion, Reeze as he was called in my dreams, to a vast world with crystallized walls and boxes. And the dream ended that night with her and Reeze awaiting their fate from the priests and priestesses and Etal. Just like the day before, I had the dream in the back of my mind the entire day through and just like the previous night, the dream continued on.

The next morning, after having dreamed of this place and the people for three nights straight, I decided that it was time to pick up a pencil and write everything down on paper. What resulted was roughly three to four chapters, which eventually whittled down to the first two chapters plus the first few pages of chapter three. Unfortunately, as soon as I sat down to write all the events down on paper the dreams ended! It was now up to me to finish Kaia and Reeze’s story.

I knew from the very beginning that this was going to be a story with a journey in it. At the time, the only things that I could really base that off of were the more “epic” anime (epic as in they had way too many episodes) such as Pokemon and InuYasha. And I thought that because of the characters’ odd hair color, it might be better suited if I had based it off of those anime adventures and turned it into a light parody. The four main characters were then turned into cookie-cutter types that you would find in a typical adventure, but I realized quite quickly that these characters didn’t want to be in a parody. They wanted to be in their own story, so I scrapped the parody idea. The characters themselves still hold a bit of the stereotypical anime characters you find in the more “epic” shows though.

For the next four years, I wrote the story on and off not really sure if I would even finish it. The most I’d ever written were a few poorly written fanfiction that I managed to finish and a number of papers for school. Finally, I took it more seriously in my senior year of highschool, and managed to get over a bit of a block that had been bugging me for quite some time. I researched magic, Wiccans, mythology, folk lore, and origin stories. It took five years, but I finally managed to finish my story. I took another year to revise, read, and revise again. In 2010, the book was as perfect as it was ever going to be (though my inner author voice keeps shouting that I could revise again) and I submitted it to be published, with the helpful nudging from my father.

The Chosen: Book 1

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Kaia’s entire life has erupted in flames after an assassin appears and burns her village down. She’s rescued by a god from another planet who requests her help because she’s the descendant of their last savior. Together with Reeze—the only other survivor from her village and her appointed guardian—they set off on a quest to find the treasures of the gods in hopes of preventing a dire prophesy.

Kaia and Reeze quickly meet the Tueors, a group of people many thought extinct, who are searching specifically for Kaia. Their intention: to protect the truth. As Kaia discovers more about the truth and her family’s past, she also learns of the Tueors’ bloody secret. Will Kaia be the savior the gods have been waiting for? Or will she let the prophesy come true?

5 stars review“It has a similar tone to The Iron Fey, if you are familiar with Julie Kagawa novels. The big difference here is The Chosen is not a tale of fairies. The journey surely takes us to another world with another civilization altogether and one with a mythical and mystical feel to it.”

— Cynthia from The Wytch’s Mirror

4 stars review“Secrets, that I totally did not see coming, unfold about a certain favorite character of mine. And, of course, more secrets were out of the magical basket from here on out. The ending was well-written, and a total cliffhanger!”

— Rockee from RockeeMusikReads

3.5 stars review“Freitas has created a great novel for MG and YA, and although it can be a little slow at times, the plotline and characters are interesting enough that it keeps the reader bound to it. I really enjoyed reading about the many different types of heroes that Freitas has strung together in her novel, and watching this unlikely crew, humans, mermaids, vampires, Tuoers, and demigods all work together to save and protect Kaia was a real treat.”

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4.5 stars review“I found myself hating and liking Kaia. She doesn’t mope around, constantly complain, or take out her frustration/anger/sadness on other people, unlike most heroines (which is a good thing. A very good thing). … I loved the mythology of the book. The details about the Gods, Luminaries, Aeons and circles fascinated me. All the information clicked into place.”

— Sabrina from Cup of Tea Reviews

3 star review“In spite of what I felt were shortcomings to the book, something kept me reading. I wanted to uncover the secrets. The ending of the story felt at once incomplete while still offering some closure. If this were meant to be a stand-alone book, I would have felt disappointment.The ending answers some questions but leaves others unanswered, and even adds a question or two to the mix. Knowing there is a continuation of this series in the works, the ending feels more satisfactory.”

— Gracekrispy from Motherlode

4 stars review“This book is perfect for those who enjoy mythology. The book starts out by almost shocking the reader. The first chapter lulls the reader into a sense of security until, about halfway through, the action breaks in and chaos begins.”

— Krystal from Live to Read

4 stars review“The author spins an amazing tale full of love, courage, a good basis on mythology about Gods and such, and she manages to bring it all together with writing that flows. I seriously can’t wait to read the next in the series!”

— Sahina from Reading in Between the Lines

The Playlist

Below is a playlist of music that I created that I feel relates to The Chosen. Some deal with the book and the themes, others help set the mood for certain scenes, and some I selected way back when I was trying to figure out relationships between characters.

The Chosen from sheenah.freitas on 8tracks Radio.

The Number

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Kaia disappeared for five years. Now she’s back and her planet is on the brink of war.

The new “Numbers” program, created by the Tueors’ leader, tracks and isolates demigods. Kaia’s friend, Catrina, refuses to take part, and that makes her the most dangerous Number of all.

It’s Kaia’s duty to gather and protect the treasures of the gods.  But neither the treasures nor Catrina are what they appear to be.

As the day a dire prophesy foresees draws near, will Kaia reverse the gears of fate, or will everything she’s ever loved be burned away by the flames of war?

Reviews

5 stars review“From the very beginning I was captivated, thrilled, curious, and concerned. The excitement continues to build and again with lots of magic and mystical flavor. Freitas has an incredible writing technique that you are truly missing out on if you have not read her work.”

— Cynthia from The Wytch’s Mirror

“I really enjoyed reading about the characters, their journey and the world Sheenah so wonderfully built with words. It was fun and intriguing to see how the characters and plot developed as the story progressed. It was fairly easy to get inside Kaia’s head and see things from her perspective, but the character I found the most engaging was Reeze. The supporting cast added some depth and comic relief to the story as well. I was also very impressed with the depth and complexity of the twists in the plot, particularly as the end drew near.”

— Yue from Scribblings

3.5 stars review“The author’s creation of fantasy worlds is appealing; the mission is exciting. Middle schoolers and young teens might really enjoy reading this series of mystical adventures.”

— Colleen from Live to Read

3.5 stars review“I was often “on the edge of my seat” while reading this and my emotions were all over the charts. The ending was both brilliant and infuriating all at once! The author brings all emotions out full-force, without much rest in between.”

–Stephsgrn from My World

3 star review“Once again, we enter the world wherein gods, demigods, mermaids, vampires, and other mythical creatures co-exist. Kaia has grown a lot in this book, and she’s not the naïve girl we know in the first book.”

— Ice from Book Whales

The Playlist

Below is a playlist of music that I created that I feel relates to The Number. Some deal with the book and the themes, others help set the mood for certain scenes, and some I selected way back when I was trying to figure out relationships between characters.

The Number from sheenah.freitas on 8tracks Radio.